This is great writing! I laughed at times, and at other times, I did the "critical thinking" thing and related to different parts of the story. I forgot about the Wendy Wasserstein play and the name Schlomo--how could I forget? Besides being personally part of the story, I related to the parts about Dorothy Day because her work is often in the textbooks I use. As for Wendy Wasserstein, I briefly met her twice (I regret not talking with her more, but she came off very shy), and had a chance to stage on of her one act plays at school (she wrote a really funny version of Medea).
OK, enough about me...back to your story...this work is well-written and can really keep an audience's attention. It has some humor as well as makes a person think. I look forward to reading more of your story! Now, I have to look up that movie...
This is great writing! I laughed at times, and at other times, I did the "critical thinking" thing and related to different parts of the story. I forgot about the Wendy Wasserstein play and the name Schlomo--how could I forget? Besides being personally part of the story, I related to the parts about Dorothy Day because her work is often in the textbooks I use. As for Wendy Wasserstein, I briefly met her twice (I regret not talking with her more, but she came off very shy), and had a chance to stage on of her one act plays at school (she wrote a really funny version of Medea).
OK, enough about me...back to your story...this work is well-written and can really keep an audience's attention. It has some humor as well as makes a person think. I look forward to reading more of your story! Now, I have to look up that movie...
Thank you so much! Those are real compliments, coming from an actual professor!